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The art is nice but the actual animation is nearly non-existent! Keep at it! :)
The broken English keeps me from getting immersed in the story, and the generic RPGMaker graphics and PS1-esque 3D models keep me from playing any further than answering the door. I would recommend either doing the game in your native language or hiring a translator, and work on making your game stand apart from the 10,000 other RPGmaker adult games here on Newgrounds.
Deep Secrets v0.2 will also be available in the Russian language and with such new features as Advanced Energy and Injury Mechanics
Very nicely done, great animation!!
Game won't start when I click with my mouse. I checked it on my mobile device afterwards and it's not compatible.
The dialogue in this game is definitely better than your previous games, but still sounds really awkward. The art still looks like bare minimum effort - Microsoft Clipart-esque. If you want the animation to look more smooth, you need more than just tweening in and out. It looks pretty stiff as is. Put more effort into details and making each scene look good, and don't progress until you're proud of your work!
The gameplay itself definitely needs work, but you know that. The feet are very big, even for an exaggerated perspective. The face looks great, but the grey skin and neon pink nipples aren't very pretty. I'm not sure if you're able to apply some sort of anti-aliasing, but that would help with those sharp edges. Overall it's an interesting test, looking forward to where this goes!
A loading screen is very important. The gravity in the game feels a bit off when you jump, and the character's face looks a bit weird when moving compared to standing still. If you move right after a dialogue box the character will move without the walking animation triggering. With some improvement and cleaning up this can be pretty cool!
Thanks for your feedback, I hope to get better on the long run.
Thanks for playing!
Hmm.. Nothing's loading :O
Not bad, but feels like pretty much every other RPG Maker game. The character's hair turns from dirty-blonde to brunette between chat sequences and the in-game sprite, too...
Hey Pharaoh! How are you?
Yeah, you're right about Rebecca's hair changing colors between chat sequences. This will be fixed on next versions when her 3D model will be revamped and it will look more human/less alien! lol
The in-game sprite shouldn't be changing, though. Isn't it the tint screen depending on the time of the day?
"but feels like pretty much every other RPG Maker game"
> I apologize for that. I'm trying so much to run away from this "Bad RPG Maker game" stereotype... Well, I'll do my best to improve that, then. Thank you very much for your feedback!
The character selection feels limited since they all have the same exact scenes (literally the same pictures with the girl you selected shown at the end). The art is existing porn pictures put through a filter, but you should make sure it's the same models (or at least the same hair color/length) - it really pulls me out of it if the girl is changing throughout scenes.
The game's layout and design is pretty solid, though a little basic. It definitely looks nice! You should also really give credit to the models and the copyright owners of the original images.
Thanks for the feedback.
Do not forget, this is primarily a text-based game. The choice of the character was conceived exclusively for the multiplayer mode. Most images are taken from the Internet, and processed using AI. In the intro game there is an explanation - the character is different because she feels so in different situations. I can not find similar models for scenes, I rummaged tons of porn, there are not so many varieties as I thought. And it's simply impossible to draw so many scenes.
The idea of the future development of the game is that every gamer can add his own scenes, and others can participate in them. Credits to the models and the copyright owners of the original images were also conceived in the future.
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