Quite a few spelling errors, also very long and kind of rambling. The animation of the text looked good. I hope you own the rights to the music.
Haha, that was fantastic! The songs were spot-on and the whole thing was hilarious!
Nice job!! The art is great, and I love the coloring and facial expressions!
A few suggestions: the low framerate makes it look quite choppy. Also since this doesn't have any interaction, I would recommend making a video formatted version of this so people can view it on their phones as well, you'll get a lot more views! Newgrounds has a great free tool called Swivel that will convert swf to various formats!
Feels a little clunky, but pretty great! I love ambitious projects and look forward to updates. Also, your Patreon buttons don't work on Newgrounds - your code tries to replace the swf with the html and it simply doesn't work like that on Newgrounds. Try this code for a separate pop-up for your Patreon:
patreon.buttonMode = true;
function patreonbutton(event : Event)
var myURL:URLRequest = new URLRequest("https://www.patreon.com/(your patreon)");
navigateToURL(myURL, "https://www.patreon.com/(your patreon)");
Oh. Thanks, that's very helpful of you. It's using the same code it uses for the .EXE version and it works there, didn't expect it'd react like this in WebGL. Glad to hear you enjoyed the game, if a bit clunky, as you put it.
Looks good! Wish she went further down than just the head of the penis, though...!
Looks great!! The low background quality is a bit distracting and some the gradients are a little too much, but very nice!
Pretty solid Rick! There are some points where you can hear your accent, mostly on the long "U" sound (like "doing" in "what are you doing, Morty". Keep practicing and you'll sound just like him!
Thanks for the review man, means a lot. I will continue practising especially as the new season has just started!
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