EroPharaoh's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Christmas Time (beta version)]

First off - I do love eating meat more than love, love, love. ;)

That being said, I love this song and this animation. You have a great voice! A bit late for American Christmas, but just in time for Armenian, Coptic and Orthodox Christmas!

misslittlecutebitch responds:

thank you :) yes...i took too long finishing it. a kiss

[Smokers]

Hand is backwards (it's coming from the right, his left, which means the thumb should be the other way). He's also pushing his thumb up against the lit end, which wouldn't bode well for him.

ClaudioWillSwiftAnim responds:

hahaha, Thanks for watching, I'm still a beginner on adobe animate cc

[Music Video (Culture Code - Electricity)]

Great job, the cel-shading (combined with the dance music) reminds me of Dance Dance Revolution in the best way. :)

AguRex responds:

Hai. ..
Thanks a lot.
Was going for a futuristic techno feel.

[IF I WERE A CARTOON]

This is interesting. I like the animation. The music is also interesting. The hands could use more variation and the spotlight shouldn't just go over the creature - it should block a bit of it.

Author's Comments: "this one won't even get an 1.5 star but i don't care. this cartoon is something that i always wanted to make. this cartoon is bad as me. i also wrote music for this"

Instead of putting yourself down, you should continue working until you're proud of it. If you're proud of it, then show you are proud. (Unless you're baiting people into giving a higher score by acting self-deprecating, in that case stop being a Jerry.)

GillBates responds:

thank you for the review) i'll try to explain: i'm proud of my work. i love making a bad cartoons or ugly arts. because that's who I am. i'm not trying to baiting people into giving a higher score. i just warn the most of the people that they are probably won't like this cartoon. I'm just trying to find audience that like the same kind of art that I. And also I don't sure should I show people that I'm proud of my work. I just said that I don't care how bad rating is gonna be on this one.

[Caveman Fire Animated Music Video]

Awesome job! Took a bit to get to the music part but it's worth it. The neon style looks great! Were you influenced by the Gorillaz Clint Eastwood music video? If so, awesome, that's one of my all-time favorite music videos! It's one of the things that got me interested in animation :)

bucketboi responds:

Thanks much appreciated. Definitely was inspired by gorillaz growing up, im working towards that kind of quality but with my own style.
Again thanks for watching.

[Carrots!]

Cute, lip syncing could be better. Unfortunately this is also uninformative to kids, as it pushes the myth that carrots help with eyesight (they don't - it was propaganda from WWII - Google it). They have plenty of other health benefits but you seem to focus on the one part that is false.

Animation-S responds:

"Vitamin A plays a vital role in bone growth, reproduction and immune system health. It also helps the skin and mucous membranes repel bacteria and viruses more effectively. It is essential to healthy vision, and may slow declining retinal function in people with retinitis pigmentosa."

-These animations are done on a low budget with the intentions to make kids be happy.
-Lies that people say in a moment of history have nothing to do with facts about health.

Thanks for watching!

[Demo Reel 20170912]

Nicely done, I love the fluidity!! One thing about the blinking - it looks like there's a frame when they're just about to close their eyes that has the pupils in a different position. Should be an easy fix though :) Great work!

PeachesAndBiscuit responds:

Ack, I see what you mean, good observation, thank you.

[2Pac Man]

Not a very original idea, but well executed, I liked it!

Just a note though: Pac would NOT run from Biggie! ;)

AnimatedTdot responds:

Lol thank you. I agree he wouldnt.

[West Tree gag show ep 16]

The art looks nice, I like the expressions! The audio is pretty low-quality, a better mic is a must for voice-acting!

It feels kind of lazy the way it's an animatic instead of an animation, too. Quality is almost always better than quantity. If you want to make money from this, you have to show people that you're willing to work. Bridge the gap between amateur and professional by filling in those frames!

Overall, nice job, good luck!

P.S. I think you may have also sized the video wrong for the swf; a lot of stuff on the top and bottom isn't supposed to be seen I'm pretty sure. ;)

zachdewd responds:

I would animate it, but I'm really busy with my job with Smashbits Animations, but there will be something bigger coming soon I can guarantee you that.

As for the swf, i usually never resize for those anymore with how flash is dying and stuff, so i usually just assume people will watch it in the HTML video format.

but yeah, one day I'll get a better mic.