EroPharaoh's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[COMING SOON...]

Very nicely animated! The voice-acting and audio quality are something that can be worked on though :)

NK64 responds:

Thanks for the feedback! What type of mic would you recommend?

[Strong Viking Obstacle Run]

Smooth animation, but short! I like it - the credits might be longer than the animation itself though!

Artcraft responds:

next animation will be a little bit longer. Thx for feedback ^^

[Horror TV]

The stop-go animation seems pretty choppy, and a lot of objects like the cactus and mug move around without being touched throughout. Try to be more careful to not move other set objects when you're moving the character! I'm not sure why the eyes change color but it looks odd, is it supposed to be his emotion or a reflection of the TV? Also, spiders don't spit their webs...they pulls it out from the end of their abdomen using their 4th pair of legs. Aside from this, it's a great animation, the sounds match up well and it as overall fun to watch. I'd love to see your next video, never stop improving! :)

ClayDay responds:

Thank you! Ya this the second week I have been making stop motions, I really enjoy it! Thanks for the advice! I was getting mad at the cactus lol, now I know to secure static props.

[Sonic Fails 2]

I started animating when I was around your age! It's a great try, but it's really really short and it's hard to understand what's going on - why was he in space? And I believe that's Super Sonic flying past, but there doesn't appear to be a reason why. By the end, my only reaction was "huh?"

Try to spend a little more time on your animations, have a clear story and keep the viewers interested! :)

Also, as a resident of Chicago, I wanted to point out that you spelled "Illinois" wrong in your profile. ;)

UTPComix responds:

Thanks. I'll try to improve on those!

[Speedpainting - ZigZag]

Wonderful art, but I never understood the appeal of speed painting videos. I'd rather just see the result! ;)

Baarmaboi responds:

Some people want to see the process and then the result. But glad you like it.

[The Vision]

Quite a few spelling errors, also very long and kind of rambling. The animation of the text looked good. I hope you own the rights to the music.

KarltoonLD responds:

Sorry. My deadline for this was only a week, so everything was quite rushed.

[Feeling Lost - Funk Beatz]

Very strange, but somewhat hypnotic. Is the guy with the blue shirt supposed to be Beavis as Cornholio?

FunkBeatzBand responds:

That guy is actually the singer for our band. Unfortunately we have all split up.

[Want an Duo]

Nicely done! The only thing I can think to improve on is the background music could've been louder compared to the sfx and voices. :)

RandoomName responds:

hehe thx a lot for the feedback bro, i hope do better in the next time =D