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THE AUDIO IS CRAP.

Just kidding, it's actually not that bad of quality! I enjoyed this, the characters are likable and the dialogue flows well. The jokes are great! The first two characters seriously remind me of Dante and Randal from Clerks, especially with their banter (this is good.)

I look forward to seeing more with these characters, got anything planned with them?

This website is for your own work.

The stop-go animation seems pretty choppy, and a lot of objects like the cactus and mug move around without being touched throughout. Try to be more careful to not move other set objects when you're moving the character! I'm not sure why the eyes change color but it looks odd, is it supposed to be his emotion or a reflection of the TV? Also, spiders don't spit their webs...they pulls it out from the end of their abdomen using their 4th pair of legs. Aside from this, it's a great animation, the sounds match up well and it as overall fun to watch. I'd love to see your next video, never stop improving! :)

ClayDay responds:

Thank you! Ya this the second week I have been making stop motions, I really enjoy it! Thanks for the advice! I was getting mad at the cactus lol, now I know to secure static props.

I started animating when I was around your age! It's a great try, but it's really really short and it's hard to understand what's going on - why was he in space? And I believe that's Super Sonic flying past, but there doesn't appear to be a reason why. By the end, my only reaction was "huh?"

Try to spend a little more time on your animations, have a clear story and keep the viewers interested! :)

Also, as a resident of Chicago, I wanted to point out that you spelled "Illinois" wrong in your profile. ;)

UTPComix responds:

Thanks. I'll try to improve on those!

Wonderful art, but I never understood the appeal of speed painting videos. I'd rather just see the result! ;)

Baarmaboi responds:

Some people want to see the process and then the result. But glad you like it.

Decently animated, though "stick figure animation" is a pretty flooded market already. The lack of backgrounds really make this feel rushed and incomplete. The fact that you don't even put the full video up and expect us to go to another website to finish watching is ridiculous.

Super cute story, and just purely beautiful to look at. Great style, great colors, great animation all around. :)

Lip-syncing is great, and I laughed at his little song. My biggest beef is...stick figures, I mean, really?

Quite a few spelling errors, also very long and kind of rambling. The animation of the text looked good. I hope you own the rights to the music.

KarltoonLD responds:

Sorry. My deadline for this was only a week, so everything was quite rushed.

Haha, that was fantastic! The songs were spot-on and the whole thing was hilarious!

Hey everyone! I make adult (18+) animations and games! Support me here: https://www.patreon.com/eropharaoh

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