Text menus still stack when clicked multiple times. I wish there was a back button for the horde screen...accidentally click it, and you have to either finish the fight or wait to die. It still feels pretty tedious to play instead of fun, but with tweaking this can be great!
You can hit enter during fights to retreat.
Why is the mummy running on a boardwalk in space? Answering this question and giving it a story will help set it apart from other "run" games.
The score box and basically everything that isn't in-game graphics feel like bare minimum effort, which makes me think you may not have actually made these graphics...Sorry if I'm wrong there, but you should really put more effort into the rest of the game either way.
As it is, this is a fairly forgettable game (nothing too unique), but it has potential!
Thanks for giving feedback! :) I will keep this in mind for next time.
Bravo! Very very well done!!
I'd like to add to the comment below me that the only good part about this, the artwork, doesn't even belong to "SexHotGames" - they love to steal artwork and not give credit to the people who actually did the hard work. NONE of these pictures belong to them - they just made the tedious game that makes you work for artwork you can literally find on Google.
(One of the artists they steal from is "nigou", feel free to search for more of their work instead of playing this embarrassing waste of time)
The coding seems solid, but it's a little slow-paced. The artwork also needs a lot of work - characters are missing fingers, anatomy is a bit wonky, the shading rarely makes sense and the style seems to switch between characters (which makes it look traced). After 2 years and with $4.5k a month, you should really hire an artist..
Not bad at all! It seems to pause in the beginning before any selections are made, not sure if that's intentional or not but I thought it froze for a second. The animation is smooth, and the artwork looks nice. The main issues I see are with the hands (all of them, but especially the "panty pull" hand - that looks really unnatural) and the "top" person's shirt/penis looks off - there's a white part to the sides of penis, not sure if that's a mistake or if I'm just not seeing what's it's supposed to be, and the way the penis is moving doesn't make much sense with how the rest of the body moves. I'm also not sure why the butthole gets flat in the third option down - if it's supposed to be switching to anal, then it's kind of weird that ONLY the butthole moves...It needs a lot of tweaking, I know my review seems like mostly complaints, but I like what I see and I'm looking forward to improvements!
Yup, the pause at the beginning was intentional; should've made that a little more obvious it seems.
As for everything else, I admit, some mistakes were made and some parts didn't come out exactly as intended.
Still, I do hope to improve in the future ^^
Stiff and awkward animation, and the art - if not stolen outright - is clearly heavily based off PlayShape's models. It's an interesting concept and the actual design is nice (the UI & title screens look really good), but the actual adult content is extremely lacking, and that kind of ruins the whole thing. I'd recommend hiring an artist as soon as you can - if you had some nice original artwork and smooth animation, this could really be something!
Fantastic! A couple graphical glitches here and there (the buttcrack in the reverse cowgirl scene is the most noticeable), but other than that I love it!
The artwork looks great, and the animation is very smooth and pleasant to watch.
The "eyes closing and reopening" to set the scene is done very well, it really keeps the flow going without completely removing you from the scene.
The lighting/shading effects are beautiful. This is a great example of gradients done right.
The gameplay is really interesting, and it's nice that it can be played in my peripheral vision so I can watch the animation. This is also a great example of a hentai game done right - it's not difficult, you can focus on the animation, and even better are the auto/manual options after each level.
The end scene with her licking is great too - I'm a big fan of tongue stuff!
Looking forward to seeing more from you! Good luck!!
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There's my first problem. What? Hire a translator if you don't know English well enough, or just have the dialogue in your native language. Not that story necessarily matters in pornographic content, but when it's that bad, it's distracting. Something that DOES matter in pornographic content is the *pornographic content* - I just sat through that terrible intro and now I have to do a rock paper scissors mini-game that relies on nothing but luck? That's bullshit, man, and you know it. I didn't get to the actual adult content because I quit when I saw the mini-game, but I'm assuming the artwork matches the Microsoft Clipart-esque style of the rest of your work.
Put more effort into your work. I see that you have the talent and skills, but everything you've done here feels like the bare minimum of what you can do. Spend more time on each scene, and only progress to the next one when you are satisfied with what you've done. If you find yourself saying "ah, well, that's good enough", then you are not living up to your full potential. Good luck on your future projects, I hope to see improvement!
I love all the new additions. It's still too difficult to build up gold though, so I'm unable to see any of the Special Friendship Scenes. I don't think it's my fault since there isn't any tactic to the fighting yet.
I really love the art and the gameplay, but I feel like I should be getting more gold from defeating the monsters - I end up spending all of it on health potions and I can't build up enough to buy the items for the scenes. It's fun when it's challenging, but it's frustrating when I'm unable to see the fun rewards. Any tips on building up gold until you make it a bit easier?
P.S. I know it sounds like I'm complaining in this entire review, but I want to bring it back to me really digging this. I don't really have any constructive criticism other than the difficulty, great work! :)
This is my beginning strategy for building gold:
Start by fighting slimes. If lamias pop up, just run. When you run out of health, let the shop heal you the free 25 hp by just leaving the shop. You can kill slimes on 25hp, so you don't really need to buy health potions if you repeat this. Slimes also power you up once you befriend them, and I think you'll find by the time you've battled enough to befriend slimes your gold intake will be high enough you won't have too much of a problem from there.
As my last hint; look through different areas after killing slimes to find the next weakest monster; your second target probably won't be lamias~
Hope that helps! :)
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